Thursday 9 January 2014

Celebs v Privacy

L/O: to refine exam technique for 18 mark style questions by using the PEEL writing technique to enable you to reach your target grades

Starter:
Match the celeb to the 2013 news story



Todays Question:
Last year, the phone hacking scandal was ‘big’ news within the celebrity world, with lots of talk about the invasion of celebrity’s private lives.

However, with the introduction of reality tv, many celebrities are now made famous through the media.

Explain the advantages and disadvantages of the media's involvement in celebrities lives.

In your answer, you might want to talk about:
  • Promotion; for example their latest film/single etc.
  • Relationships & families
  • Actions they take in their private lives e.g. hobbies
  • as well as your own ideas.

Include 2 PEELs for advantages and 2 PEELs for disadvantages, and a PEEL for your own opinion in conclusion.

18 marks available




Mark Scheme:
Level 5: (PEEL)

  • A well-argued discussion, using stimulus or own ideas effectively showing understanding and evaluation.
  • A variety of points are discussed showing understanding.
  • Text will be readable and spelling, grammar & punctuation almost faultless.
Level 4: (PEE)
  • A developed answer with good attempt to use stimulus material or own ideas, showing clear understanding and evaluation.
  • Text will generally be legible and spelling, grammar and punctuation will show considerable accuracy.
Level 3: (PE)
  • A reasonable answer with some attempt to use stimulus matieral and/or own ideas, but lacking understanding and knowledge.
  • Examples used but explained
  • Text will generally be legible and spelling, grammar and punctuation will show reasonable accuracy.
Level 2: (P)
  • A limited answer with little use of stimulus or own ideas.
  • Answer is unclear and example not used.
  • Text may have occasional problems of understanding and spelling, grammar and punctuation will be fairly accurate.
Level 1:
  • A very basic answer with limited knowledge.
  • No examples used
  • Text will be difficult to read and spelling, grammer and punctuation may be inaccurate to cause problems with understanding.

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